Part of the Seven Holy Paths to Hell, Vicious Valentine Anthology
I had to start here. I love the perspective of the jungle here. It feels more holy than sinful. Made me feel peaceful. I was seduced
I love that it made you feel that. It's supposed to be a little hypnotizing, for sure. Thanks for reading!!
For the record I made my comment before reading yours and I won’t delete it haha. All of us seduced! 🙌🏽
same 😺
🙏🏽😸
So hypnotic 😍 I want to be devoured ahh
Thank you!! 🤍🫀
Does the jungle want me, or do I want it? Do I consume the jungle, or does it consume me? All are true.
Listening first, then reading helped me with the rhythm you intended. Well done on both the flowing river of prose and the narration.
Thank you so much for saying that! This one was new for me and I've been going back and forth with whether or not I like it.
I love this manic, lustful pace.
Jungle takes no prisoners. Hell yeah
Lust can make us out of our minds!! Thank you!!
Really pulled into this from the start. Very immersive and seductive piece. Enjoyed the balance between the life giving force of nature and death.
Thank you! New territory for me in terms of style. I wanted it to feel like an incantation, something dark and feverish. Appreciate the read!
oh wow this is so thrilling and you've executed the jungle imagery perfectly. loved the voiceover as well- definitely added another great dimension to the piece!
Sofi! Thank you! Out of my comfort zone with this so I really appreciate your thoughts on it! (critique too, if you have any)
This work is a new favorite of mine. I’m obsessed with every line. It’s asking me so much, and it’s telling me even more. And your voice is perfect.
You have made my day. This means a lot coming from you. Thank you so much 😊 I was so unsure about it, but it felt right!
I’m so glad you made my day, it inspired me for sure. 🥰
The jungle is the god. This was so good.
Thanks so much! It was new for me but I'm happy with it.
The heart line is such an interesting motif both intimate and ominous. I'm willing to be consumed.
i had a good time learning a little palmistry for this. Glad it came through that way for you.
re: the consuming, just listen for the rush of water…
🤘🏽🤘🏽🤘🏽
The voiceover is 🔥. Amps up the sensuousness
Ohh thank you!! I'm getting a kick out of reading/voiceovers/spoken word.
I love that there is no separation in this. It just is. Flowing as the river it speaks of. Love this!
Thank you 🤍
I love the impatient frustration within this piece!! I am thoroughly immersed with this style.
Yes! I'm glad to hear it!!
Feverish and hypnotic 🥴
🌀🌀🌀 thank you
The jungle is always on top.. especially on Sundays..
So fricken cool, immaculate reading too. Nailed the performance, really loved this one 🌱
😆 it sure is. Thank you!! It was out of my comfort zone as far as writing but I’m happy with it!
You should be! It had an awesome flow state vibe that matched your performance. More please haha
🤍
Who needs the Underworld to seduce them when the jungle’s right there?!? Loved this!
Thank you so much! Out of my comfort zone but it was fun :)
I’ve been seduced. This is seduction.
good 😌
I had to start here. I love the perspective of the jungle here. It feels more holy than sinful. Made me feel peaceful. I was seduced
I love that it made you feel that. It's supposed to be a little hypnotizing, for sure. Thanks for reading!!
For the record I made my comment before reading yours and I won’t delete it haha. All of us seduced! 🙌🏽
same 😺
🙏🏽😸
So hypnotic 😍 I want to be devoured ahh
Thank you!! 🤍🫀
Does the jungle want me, or do I want it? Do I consume the jungle, or does it consume me? All are true.
Listening first, then reading helped me with the rhythm you intended. Well done on both the flowing river of prose and the narration.
Thank you so much for saying that! This one was new for me and I've been going back and forth with whether or not I like it.
I love this manic, lustful pace.
Jungle takes no prisoners. Hell yeah
Lust can make us out of our minds!! Thank you!!
Really pulled into this from the start. Very immersive and seductive piece. Enjoyed the balance between the life giving force of nature and death.
Thank you! New territory for me in terms of style. I wanted it to feel like an incantation, something dark and feverish. Appreciate the read!
oh wow this is so thrilling and you've executed the jungle imagery perfectly. loved the voiceover as well- definitely added another great dimension to the piece!
Sofi! Thank you! Out of my comfort zone with this so I really appreciate your thoughts on it! (critique too, if you have any)
This work is a new favorite of mine. I’m obsessed with every line. It’s asking me so much, and it’s telling me even more. And your voice is perfect.
You have made my day. This means a lot coming from you. Thank you so much 😊 I was so unsure about it, but it felt right!
I’m so glad you made my day, it inspired me for sure. 🥰
The jungle is the god. This was so good.
Thanks so much! It was new for me but I'm happy with it.
The heart line is such an interesting motif both intimate and ominous. I'm willing to be consumed.
i had a good time learning a little palmistry for this. Glad it came through that way for you.
re: the consuming, just listen for the rush of water…
🤘🏽🤘🏽🤘🏽
The voiceover is 🔥. Amps up the sensuousness
Ohh thank you!! I'm getting a kick out of reading/voiceovers/spoken word.
I love that there is no separation in this. It just is. Flowing as the river it speaks of. Love this!
Thank you 🤍
I love the impatient frustration within this piece!! I am thoroughly immersed with this style.
Yes! I'm glad to hear it!!
Feverish and hypnotic 🥴
🌀🌀🌀 thank you
The jungle is always on top.. especially on Sundays..
So fricken cool, immaculate reading too. Nailed the performance, really loved this one 🌱
😆 it sure is. Thank you!! It was out of my comfort zone as far as writing but I’m happy with it!
You should be! It had an awesome flow state vibe that matched your performance. More please haha
🤍
Who needs the Underworld to seduce them when the jungle’s right there?!? Loved this!
Thank you so much! Out of my comfort zone but it was fun :)
I’ve been seduced. This is seduction.
good 😌